Journal #6

I primarily focused on what my partner said from the pastiche editing we did on Friday. I tried to incorporate Hurston's techniques more effectively. The theme that I was trying to show was not very clear so I tried to make it more obvious through the techniques. I developed the characters more which hopefully made the contrast between them clearer. I incorporated a motif that I believe helps express the theme I chose. I think my revisions made the theme more clear and obvious and Hurston's techniques are clearer and add to the understanding of the theme.